Sunday, December 2, 2012

The Girl Who Moved On...

Away from the cocoon of her family,
Away from the love of the close ones,
Stepped a girl all of seventeen,
Into the new mysterious world,
Its a journey worth living,
Its a bliss and a new experience,
Its a mirage they forgot to mention,
Its just a facade they forgot to convey,
She walked into the calm waters,
Hardly expecting a storm,
She treaded till a distance,
Until she almost drowned,
She fought because she was strong,
She was persistent just like when she was back home,
The waters washed away her spirit,
Filled her lungs with  salt and misery,
Breath was shallow and hard to take,
Until she thought she'd give up,
Her mother's words rang in her mind,
Her father's faith gave her hope,
She finally swam across,
With a determination at peek,
She wandered a little deeper,
The forest beckoned her at every step,
The green seemed too alluring,
But, hid a bitter truth,
The warm hearts were too good to be true,
The words seemed like gold,
The world felt like a cocoon again,
Until all hell broke loose,
Hearts were crushed,
Words were spoken too loud,
Hurt was the only motive,
To crush and walk upon,
Tears seemed to have dried up,
Cheeks had sunken in,
The body felt lifeless,
Like it was just brutally kicked,
Where truth and honesty were to reign,
Seemed like an agenda was brewing in the sidelanes,
Alliances were forged and broken,
Bitches barked and were forgotten,
Then a pair of caring hands held,
The heart and mind in place,
Supported the weak, uncertain steps,
To believe and never again regret,
Life was edited off the unwanted,
Because they were too unimportant,
Life was taking course on the set path,
Trying not to make the mistakes again,
This girl she looked back,
Smiles, shrugged and carried walking on,
Life had just begun the show,
She was ready now to take on every moment,
She chose to close a chapter and begin a new one,
She was the girlwho moved on ...

3 comments:

  1. this is so similar to the one i wrote on my college going experience..havent put that up here..now that you've posted yours here, thinking i should put mine up as well.. :)

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  2. yea we all move on to new chapters, but are we really??

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  3. Guddababbu my darling and wonderful daughter.You have always been so talented and insightful.Babu,life is like a stream of fresh water,transparent,dazzling and shinning.It retains its quality of water when it actually flows like a stream of fresh water.The moment it stops,it becomes stagnated like that puddle of water that never flows and over a period of time becomes contaminated because the stagnation robs water of all its freshness.
    Hence, it becomes important for everyone to keep moving ahead in life and flow with the flow of life to evolve with each coming and passing phase of life.
    Here I want to appreciate you immensely about the quick adaptations you showed towards your changed environment and surroundings.You could understand the meaning of life.Positive change leading to development of mind to the further areas of better understanding.
    Your parents have always wanted to see you glowing in the glory of your success.
    You are indeed a wonderful daughter .My baby Pulku baccha.
    However ! Miss you immensely ....................

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